The Best Princess for Girls

The Best Disney Princess for a girl's role model
(Rapunzel)

 Hello, everybody, today I am going to tell you who the best princess among the ten Disney princess. Among the 10 princesses, I think that Rapunzel is the best role model for girls. As  you read my essay you will get to know why.
 The first reason why I think Rapunzel is the best role model for girls is because she is pretty AND kind. I will talk about the appearance first. Rapunzel has a long blond hair that is magical. I think that most of the girls would have wanted to have a long blond hair like Rapunzel for some points.(or maybe not long as Rapunzel's hair, but still..) Also, we can know that she is really kind because, eventhough she wanted to go the outside world for the whole time, she did not. She listened to her fake mother Gothel until she found out that Gothel was a witch, and not her mother. For another example, animals listen to her very much. I think they listen to her because they can know that she is very polite.
 The second reason is because she is the first one who makes her own choice and gets a little bit of help from a man. Comparing to other old days Disney Princesses, she is very independent from a man, but not completely. Also comparing to Merida, she has more advantage because she gets to choose what she wants to do AND have a man's help. However, Merida has to figure out things by herself, and if I was Merida, I would feel very lonely.
 Finally, as I mentioned a little bit about it in the first reason, she has a magical power. It will be really awesome if you had a magical hair. Not only for girls but also for boys, too. In my opinion, most of the people would like to have a magical hair.
 These are the reasons why I think Rapunzel is the best role model for girls. What do you think now? Do you think that Rapunzel is the best princess? Also lastly, thank you for reading my essay. Bye..

After Watching the Movie Brave ....

 After watching movie Brave...

Have you ever been "brave" enough to try new things? After watching the movie called BRAVE, I think I have wanted to ask you. The main character in this movie is a princess called "Merida". She is very different from other Disney princesses because she doesn't get married to a prince and it kind of shows a basic image of independent woman these days. Now, I will get started with the summary. Merida was a princess who had a great talent in archery. Unlike other princesses, she loved adventure and she hated getting married. However, she had to marry one of the three suitors in the movie. The three suitors are all either very clumsy or weird. Merida got really angry at her Mom, Queen

Elinor because she just isn't ready to get married. So Merida ripped her mom's tapestry that she had spend a lot of time finishing it. Also she wanted to make choices by herself. When I watched this scene I thought Merida was NOT selfish. You get to make your own choices for your life, not your mother doing it FOR YOU. Then, she got out of the castle and followed the wisps, that told the way to peoples' fate. She met a creepy witch and told her to make a potion that can change her mom's thoughts. Although Merida ment "changing her mom's thoughts" when she said changing her, but the witch made her mom to change into a bear! Her mom, Queen Elinor, was very angry and surprised first, but after, she helped Merida to get the magic off. Merida's bear-mom had hard time to not get into Merida's dad's (Furgus) sight because he was the "Bear King". They have found out that Merida had to get the magic off before the second sunrise. As the time past, Queen Elinor's behavior became more bear-like. After all the journeys, Merida and her mom found out that she had to mend the ripped tapestry and put on her mom's body.    After the second sunrise she came back to the Queen's body. Also the three kingdoms didn't decide to marry one another. All of the three princes from three different kingdoms didn't want to marry Merida because their parents decided to make them marry. I agree on that too. You should make your own judgments for your lives. At last there was a scene that Merida and her mom was riding their horse together. The Queen's hair was very loose without a bun and we can see that she had become a more understanding-kind-of mom.
 In my conclusion you should watch this movie because I can either remind you of yourself or a person close to you. I also want to say that you should make your own decision. Thank you for reading my response essay. Bye...

Disney Princess(Rapunzel)

Name:Rapunzel

Age:18

Movie(Year):2010

Daily Activities:painting, cooking, candle-making, reading, brushing her hair, plaing with Pascal, observing the outside world from within the tower, singing, and interacting with her(fake)Mother Gothel.

Good Point:obeys her fake Mother Gothel

Bad Point:does things that she may regret a lot(makes bad choices)

Others:gets married with Eugene also known as Flynn Rider

Are YOU Childish?

Adults should Learn from Kids!

I had watched a video that a girl that was about my age who said adults should learn from kids. Her name was Adora Stivak. She was a girl who thought adults should learn from little kids. She stated that kids had a lot of imagination and creativity. Now, I am going to write down how I felt after watching the video.

I agree with Adora Stivak. Adults should learn from kids. My first reason is because children have more creativity. I think creativity is very important because if you don't have any good ideas, you can't make anything happen. All the great inventions were made out of their creative ideas. Further more, now days, many companies look for new ideas and fresh thinkings. These are the first reason why I think adults can be also teached by kids.

    And my second reason children have more potentials than adults. Adults are grown-ups. Therefore they can't really develop that much unless they work really hard. However, kids are not grown -ups yet. That means they have posibilities and potentials. These two things are important because if they add more work and perfection, they can become great. This is the second and last reason why I agree with Adora Stivak.

   My opinion in conclusion is that adults should LEARN FROM KIDS. Again, my first reason is because of the childrens' creativity and  next is because of their potentials. Thank you for reading my essay. Bye...

30 days challenge

In my GLPS writing class, we watched a video called "Matt Cutt's 30 days Challenge". Matt Cutt used to have a horrible life and he wanted to change his bad habits to have a better life. So he decided to do the 30 days challenge. 30 days challenge is  write things(habits) that you either want to subtract or add to your life. And these are my 30 days challenge.
I will talk about the things that I want to add. There are three things. My first habit that i want to have is sleeping early. The second one is to concentrate to important things. Lastly, speaking EOP.
PS. EOP is English only policy
Next, I will talk about the things that i want to subtract. First, I want to subtract the habit of being lazy and slow when I get up. Secondly, I want to also subtract the habit of eating junk food everyday. Finally, I want to get rid of the habit of having to postpone the things that are important. Thank you for reading this. Bye.

!!About Me!!

!! About Me!!

Hello everybody!! My name is Sara Kim. Shinee Day is my blog name. I am in GLPS right now. Also I am enjoying my life in GLPS. Anyways,  this blog is for my essays and stuff like that.

(Now, here is my real introduction)
My birthday is April 16th. My favorite foods are mostly Italian foods. Also, I like the color purple the best. My favorite kpop idol is Shinee. I love the season fall because it is not too cold or not too hot. It is just the right temperature. My favorite subject is history and socials. Lastly, I hope you enjoy my blog!! Bye..