2013년 1월 12일 토요일

Are YOU Childish?

Adults should Learn from Kids!


I had watched a video that a girl that was about my age who said adults should learn from kids. Her name was Adora Stivak. She was a girl who thought adults should learn from little kids. She stated that kids had a lot of imagination and creativity. Now, I am going to write down how I felt after watching the video.

I agree with Adora Stivak. Adults should learn from kids. My first reason is because children have more creativity. I think creativity is very important because if you don't have any good ideas, you can't make anything happen. All the great inventions were made out of their creative ideas. Further more, now days, many companies look for new ideas and fresh thinkings. These are the first reason why I think adults can be also teached by kids.

    And my second reason children have more potentials than adults. Adults are grown-ups. Therefore they can't really develop that much unless they work really hard. However, kids are not grown -ups yet. That means they have posibilities and potentials. These two things are important because if they add more work and perfection, they can become great. This is the second and last reason why I agree with Adora Stivak.

   My opinion in conclusion is that adults should LEARN FROM KIDS. Again, my first reason is because of the childrens' creativity and  next is because of their potentials. Thank you for reading my essay. Bye...

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  1. You have written a very well organized short essay. In your first body paragraph, you write about creativity and inventions. Some examples of inventions created by children would make this paragraph very strong.

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