In my GLPS writing class, we watched a video called "Matt Cutt's 30 days Challenge". Matt Cutt used to have a horrible life and he wanted to change his bad habits to have a better life. So he decided to do the 30 days challenge. 30 days challenge is write things(habits) that you either want to subtract or add to your life. And these are my 30 days challenge.
I will talk about the things that I want to add. There are three things. My first habit that i want to have is sleeping early. The second one is to concentrate to important things. Lastly, speaking EOP.
PS. EOP is English only policy
Next, I will talk about the things that i want to subtract. First, I want to subtract the habit of being lazy and slow when I get up. Secondly, I want to also subtract the habit of eating junk food everyday. Finally, I want to get rid of the habit of having to postpone the things that are important. Thank you for reading this. Bye.
I will talk about the things that I want to add. There are three things. My first habit that i want to have is sleeping early. The second one is to concentrate to important things. Lastly, speaking EOP.
PS. EOP is English only policy
Next, I will talk about the things that i want to subtract. First, I want to subtract the habit of being lazy and slow when I get up. Secondly, I want to also subtract the habit of eating junk food everyday. Finally, I want to get rid of the habit of having to postpone the things that are important. Thank you for reading this. Bye.
Hello!
답글삭제I am your roommate heewon.
I please hope that your promises, especially not eating junkfoods, will be kept for at least 1day... I am talking from my heart, friend... haha... BYE~~~~
FIx:
답글삭제line 1: period before "Matt Cutt"
line 2: life. And -> life, so
line 3: when u -> a challenge in which you
line 4: take out "And" and capitalize "These"
line 5: My -> The
line 5: capitalize "I"
line 6: sleeping -> to sleep
line 6: to -> on after concentrate
line 6: speaking -> keeping
line 8: capitalize "I"
I think you are good at English. I especially like your last paragraph. You have very few grammatical mistakes and almost no structure mistakes. Keep up the great work! :)
Hi!! 서빈~Im 민지. I like your blog. I think you love shinee, and you are. I want to call you shinee!! Bye!!
답글삭제Well..I think it SHOULD be okay to call me that...Maybe...keke
답글삭제keke=ㅋㅋ