!! About Me!!
Hello everybody!! My name is Sara Kim. Shinee Day is my blog name. I am in GLPS right now. Also I am enjoying my life in GLPS. Anyways, this blog is for my essays and stuff like that.
(Now, here is my real introduction)
My birthday is April 16th. My favorite foods are mostly Italian foods. Also, I like the color purple the best. My favorite kpop idol is Shinee. I love the season fall because it is not too cold or not too hot. It is just the right temperature. My favorite subject is history and socials. Lastly, I hope you enjoy my blog!! Bye..
FIX:
답글삭제line 2: take out "very"
line 2: Anyways (one word)
line 6: not to ... hot -> not too cold or hot
line 7: socials -> social studies
line 8: And lastly -> lastly
You are a good writer. You made the least mistakes in your class. Just be careful with a few words. Do not start a sentence with "And".
Nice to meet you. You really seem to like Shinee. I think they're great, too. I hope I get to know you better. :)
Hi Sara!! I'm Jamie.
답글삭제It's my first time to visit your blog.
I thik the post was interesting!!
Bye
Thank you!!Jamie!!I thought ur blog was interesting too!
답글삭제wow! we have lot of things in commen I was born in April 19th sooo close1
답글삭제also my fav color is puple,neon,hot pink!
I love pizza and pasta! bye
enjoy the camp^^
I miss ya girl~!! I can't contact with ya this days! ㅜㅜ
답글삭제and just for the add, my bday is on APril too:)